Dani was trying to make McCain seem dumb and unfitting for the position of President. Purpose of original was not only to prove McCain's unstable mind, but also to show how much he's like Bush and that if he's President, the next four years will be the same as the last. She changed the message by editing out most of the questions and just listening to McCain's responses and emphasizing how much trouble he had answering the questions. I think your re-edit was understandable but I think it would be stronger if it gave more examples or if we were introduced to the questions he was asked, but except for that, the order works. Good Job!
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Dani was trying to make McCain seem dumb and unfitting for the position of President. Purpose of original was not only to prove McCain's unstable mind, but also to show how much he's like Bush and that if he's President, the next four years will be the same as the last. She changed the message by editing out most of the questions and just listening to McCain's responses and emphasizing how much trouble he had answering the questions.
I think your re-edit was understandable but I think it would be stronger if it gave more examples or if we were introduced to the questions he was asked, but except for that, the order works. Good Job!
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